Post by mckenzie lynn mcintyre on Mar 11, 2010 13:23:36 GMT
Okay so I've been writting this story for a while and I know it's not the BEST thing ever but it's a hell of a lot longer then anything I've wrote before so I would like for yall to read it and pretty much give me a review of it...It's not complete but this is all I have so far. Please be gentle seeing as I don't write much ha. Nice long runon sentence there haha but the story is pretty much Charmed but with new people aka me + my friends and people I hate ha so yeah if you read this I owe you BIG time! Thanks!
It was a warm summers night and the only thing that could be heard was the cry of a little baby girl. Stephani rushed over to the crying childs side and picked her up. "Oh Brooke it’s okay baby girl." She cooed as she started to rock the infant. I wonder where Chad’s at. She thought to herself. Stephani had on a white tank top and a pair of black cotton PJ bottoms. Her blonde hair was pulled back in a pony tail. All of a sudden Chad shimmered into the bedroom. Stephani had known that he was part demon but kept that information away from Alison and Halee. Stephani smiled as she saw Chad. "Hey babe." She said still rocking the baby. She knew that she would have to tell her sisters something as soon as Brooke came into her powers. She did have witch powers but she also had demonic powers. "Hey honey, Sorry I was out late again." He said walking over to her and placed a kiss on her right cheek. Stephani smiled. She looked down at their daughter and smiled as she noticed Brooke fall asleep. She moved over to the crib and layed the baby down. She walked back and placed her hands on her hips and looked at Chad. "How are we gonna tell Alison and Halee that I’m married to a demon and that Brooke is part demon?" She asked with a worried look in her eyes. Chad let out a sigh and walked over close to Stephani and placed his hands on her hips. "Well we’ll cross that bridge when we get to it." He said looking down at her. "My sister’s will kill me and you both when they find out." She said with a slight laugh but also looked serious. She bit her lip and walked away from Chad and over to the bed and slipped in. "Well come on at least get a good nights sleep." She said with a smile. Chad nodded and walked over to the bed and slipped out of his clothes into his undershirt and boxers. Then he climbed into the bed and wrapped his arms around Stephani and they both went to asleep.
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"Tell me where the witches are!" An angry female voice shouted. The young redhead girl just shook her head. "I-i-i don’t know where they are!" She cryed. "P-p-p-please just let me go!" She cryed out. The demon just laughed and tossed the girl down on her back. She opened her right hand and a fire ball appeared. "No, Please!" The teenage girl shook her head. "Please don’t kill me." She cryed out. Tears flowed from her eyes. "One last time then, where are the witches." Allyssa shouted. "I told you I don’t know where they live." The scared girl shouted. Allyssa just shook her head and threw the ball at the girl and smiled as she watched the girl desenergrate and die. The young girl watched as the ball was thrown towards her. She started crying. Her tears flowing from her eyes. As the ball came closer and closer the girl looked down. The fire hit her hard and with a scream the girl died. "I guess I’ll just find them myself." Allyssa said with an evil laugh. Allyssa looked around to make sure no one else saw and smiled that evil smile and shimmered out to hunt the witches down.
-The next morning-
Alison woke up about seven A.M. She was always the first one up. She rubed her eyes and yawned and climbed out of her bed. She looked around and walked over to her bathroom and grabed her robe and house shoes and walked down to the kitchen. She opened all the curtins and started to fix some coffee. Next up were Stephani and Chad. They both got dressed and walked down to the kitchen. Stephani was holding a baby moniter and smiling. "Morning Alison." She said chipper. "Morning Steph. Morning Chad." She said with a smile looking at the both of them. "Hey Alison." Chad said walking over to the fridge and opening it and pulling something out to eat. Last up was Halee, like always. She yawned as she walked down the stairs. "Morning." She said sleeply. "Hey sis." Both Alison and Stephani said together. Halee never really was a morning person...not like Alison or Steph. They loved mornings. With their job they had to love mornings. Mornings ment surviving the night. It ment keeping the fight between good and evil. Stephani smiled as she watched her baby sister walk over to the table and lay her head down. "You can’t go back to sleep!" Alison said kinda loudly. "She’s right." Chad said fixing Halle a cup of coffee. "Here, this’ll help." He said handing the cup to her. "Thanks." Halee said and took a sip of the hot drink. All of a sudden bright blue and white orbs filled the kitchen. There stood Hayden. He looked around the room and over at Alison and smiled. He had always had a thing for her."Hey Hayden! Whats going on?" Halee asked as she moved over to the kitchen counter and layed her head and closed her eyes again. "Well one of my other charges has been killed." He said with a sigh. "Do you think you could bring down the Book?" He asked looking at Alison again. Alison looked up at him and nodded. "Sure I’ll go get it." She said and walked out of the kitchen and into the attic to retreve the book. "So Hayden how you been?" Chad asked. Hayden looked at Chad. "I’ve been good. And yourself?" Chad smiled as he looked down at Stephani and placed his arm around her waist and nodded. "I’ve been good." Almost instantly Brooke started to cry. Stephani looked at Chad with a smile, "I’ll go take care of her." She said as she walked out of the kitchen but not before taking one last glance at Chad.
Halee was now looking up at Hayden and Chad. "So how did your other charge die?" She asked trying to get some information out of Hayden. "A demon how else." He said roleing his eyes. "Ah so our day begins at..." She looked over to the clock and sighed. "...7:19 A.M." She said looking around for her sisters. "I’ll go see what’s taking Alison so long." She said and stood up and walked up to the attic.
Stephani walked into her and Chad’s bedroom and over to their daughter and picked her up. "It’s okay hunny." She said with a smile. She walked out of the room and over to the Attic. "What’s going on in here?" She asked to Alison and Halee. "Nothen. Nothing at all" Alison said suddenly and closed the book and picked it up and started to walk to the kitchen. Stephani looked at Halee and shrugged. "Well I better get back to Chad." Stephani said walking out of the attic. "Yeah I should get back to Hayden." Halee said with a chipper voice. Stephani didn’t really feel like walking down to the kitchen so she orbed out of the attic and down to the kitchen. She appeared right beside Chad and smiled. "I think Brooke’s just hungry." She said with a smile. She walked over to the fridge and opened it and got out a bottle of milk. "Now what is the demon we should be looking for called?" Alison asked as she flipped through the pages of the book. "Ummm, I think she calls herself Allyssa." He said. "Ah such a human name." Halee said. "Allyssa, A medium level demon. Her powers include fire balls, power consumption and shimmering." Alison said reading it. "Middle level?!?" Chad said shocked. Middle level demons were hard to find and even harder to kill. Stephani looked from Chad over to Alison. "What’s the diffrence in middle level and lower or higher level?" She asked. Alison looked at them. "They are a mix between a lower level and a higher level and the higer level is usually stronger in them then in normal upper level demons." She said reading from memory. Stephani and Halee and the rest of the gang looked at Alison shocked. "Have you been reading up on someone?" Chad asked calmly looking from Stephani to Alison. Only Stephani knew his real name, Relzome. Alison nodded. "Yeah I have been reading up about this very interesting demon that calls himself...Relzome." Stephani and Chad looked at each other. Stephani had a worried look on her face and all that was on Chad’s was a mixture of anger and worry. He knew that Alison and Halee would try and destroy him if she ever found out that he was Relzome. "Well what did you find out about Relzome?" Stephani asked as she fed the baby. She shifted her weight from her right side to her left and looked at Alison. Hayden started to pace from one side of the room being a slight distraction to Alison and everyone. "Will you stop that!?!" Alison said with a slight hint of annoyince in her voice. Hayden shook his head and looked up at the girls. "I will if we can get back on track. You girls need to focus on Alyssa at this moment. Relzome can wait." He said going back to pacing.
All of a sudden Allyssa shimmered in and started throwing a couple of fire balls. "DEMON" Halee shouted and levitated to get away from the fire ball that was shot at her. She kicked Allyssa down to the floor. Alison looked at Stephani. "Give me Brooke and go get the crystals." Alison said and waited for Stephani to hand her the baby. "No I think Chad should hold her while I go get the crystals." She said handing Chad his daughter. Chad took her and held her as he watched Stephani orb out to the attic to grab the crystals. Stephani orbed back in and started to place the crystals around the knocked out Allyssa. "How’s that?" She asked. "Good. Now she can’t attack you guys." Hayden said. Stephani hurryed around to her sisters and they started to flip though the book of shadows to see what they could find. "There's nothing here!" Alison shouted looking over at Halee. Panic grew in the girls faces. Stephani opened her mouth to say something but Allyssa woke up, stood up, and threw a fireball at Stephani. Threw all the running around like a chicken with its head cut off someone moved a crystal so now they were useless and Allyssa would be able to leave. "I'll be back for the rest of you." She shouted and shimmered out. "Stephani!" Alison yelled and ran over to her older sister. "Hayden heal her!" Halee told him looking from Stephani to Hayden. Hayden ran over to her and put his hands over her right shoulder where she got hit and started to healed her. "What's wrong. Why's it taking so long?" Chad called from the other side of the bar. Hayden looked up at them. "I...I don't know why but she's not healing." Halee and Alison looked sick as did Chad. Halee shook her head. "Does that mean she's....dead?" She choaked the last word out. Hayden shook his head. "No...the demon did something. I don't know what but we need to find out. Fast."
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More to come if I get okay reviews haha (and the last part seems rushed...I just wrote it because it needed something ha)
It was a warm summers night and the only thing that could be heard was the cry of a little baby girl. Stephani rushed over to the crying childs side and picked her up. "Oh Brooke it’s okay baby girl." She cooed as she started to rock the infant. I wonder where Chad’s at. She thought to herself. Stephani had on a white tank top and a pair of black cotton PJ bottoms. Her blonde hair was pulled back in a pony tail. All of a sudden Chad shimmered into the bedroom. Stephani had known that he was part demon but kept that information away from Alison and Halee. Stephani smiled as she saw Chad. "Hey babe." She said still rocking the baby. She knew that she would have to tell her sisters something as soon as Brooke came into her powers. She did have witch powers but she also had demonic powers. "Hey honey, Sorry I was out late again." He said walking over to her and placed a kiss on her right cheek. Stephani smiled. She looked down at their daughter and smiled as she noticed Brooke fall asleep. She moved over to the crib and layed the baby down. She walked back and placed her hands on her hips and looked at Chad. "How are we gonna tell Alison and Halee that I’m married to a demon and that Brooke is part demon?" She asked with a worried look in her eyes. Chad let out a sigh and walked over close to Stephani and placed his hands on her hips. "Well we’ll cross that bridge when we get to it." He said looking down at her. "My sister’s will kill me and you both when they find out." She said with a slight laugh but also looked serious. She bit her lip and walked away from Chad and over to the bed and slipped in. "Well come on at least get a good nights sleep." She said with a smile. Chad nodded and walked over to the bed and slipped out of his clothes into his undershirt and boxers. Then he climbed into the bed and wrapped his arms around Stephani and they both went to asleep.
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"Tell me where the witches are!" An angry female voice shouted. The young redhead girl just shook her head. "I-i-i don’t know where they are!" She cryed. "P-p-p-please just let me go!" She cryed out. The demon just laughed and tossed the girl down on her back. She opened her right hand and a fire ball appeared. "No, Please!" The teenage girl shook her head. "Please don’t kill me." She cryed out. Tears flowed from her eyes. "One last time then, where are the witches." Allyssa shouted. "I told you I don’t know where they live." The scared girl shouted. Allyssa just shook her head and threw the ball at the girl and smiled as she watched the girl desenergrate and die. The young girl watched as the ball was thrown towards her. She started crying. Her tears flowing from her eyes. As the ball came closer and closer the girl looked down. The fire hit her hard and with a scream the girl died. "I guess I’ll just find them myself." Allyssa said with an evil laugh. Allyssa looked around to make sure no one else saw and smiled that evil smile and shimmered out to hunt the witches down.
-The next morning-
Alison woke up about seven A.M. She was always the first one up. She rubed her eyes and yawned and climbed out of her bed. She looked around and walked over to her bathroom and grabed her robe and house shoes and walked down to the kitchen. She opened all the curtins and started to fix some coffee. Next up were Stephani and Chad. They both got dressed and walked down to the kitchen. Stephani was holding a baby moniter and smiling. "Morning Alison." She said chipper. "Morning Steph. Morning Chad." She said with a smile looking at the both of them. "Hey Alison." Chad said walking over to the fridge and opening it and pulling something out to eat. Last up was Halee, like always. She yawned as she walked down the stairs. "Morning." She said sleeply. "Hey sis." Both Alison and Stephani said together. Halee never really was a morning person...not like Alison or Steph. They loved mornings. With their job they had to love mornings. Mornings ment surviving the night. It ment keeping the fight between good and evil. Stephani smiled as she watched her baby sister walk over to the table and lay her head down. "You can’t go back to sleep!" Alison said kinda loudly. "She’s right." Chad said fixing Halle a cup of coffee. "Here, this’ll help." He said handing the cup to her. "Thanks." Halee said and took a sip of the hot drink. All of a sudden bright blue and white orbs filled the kitchen. There stood Hayden. He looked around the room and over at Alison and smiled. He had always had a thing for her."Hey Hayden! Whats going on?" Halee asked as she moved over to the kitchen counter and layed her head and closed her eyes again. "Well one of my other charges has been killed." He said with a sigh. "Do you think you could bring down the Book?" He asked looking at Alison again. Alison looked up at him and nodded. "Sure I’ll go get it." She said and walked out of the kitchen and into the attic to retreve the book. "So Hayden how you been?" Chad asked. Hayden looked at Chad. "I’ve been good. And yourself?" Chad smiled as he looked down at Stephani and placed his arm around her waist and nodded. "I’ve been good." Almost instantly Brooke started to cry. Stephani looked at Chad with a smile, "I’ll go take care of her." She said as she walked out of the kitchen but not before taking one last glance at Chad.
Halee was now looking up at Hayden and Chad. "So how did your other charge die?" She asked trying to get some information out of Hayden. "A demon how else." He said roleing his eyes. "Ah so our day begins at..." She looked over to the clock and sighed. "...7:19 A.M." She said looking around for her sisters. "I’ll go see what’s taking Alison so long." She said and stood up and walked up to the attic.
Stephani walked into her and Chad’s bedroom and over to their daughter and picked her up. "It’s okay hunny." She said with a smile. She walked out of the room and over to the Attic. "What’s going on in here?" She asked to Alison and Halee. "Nothen. Nothing at all" Alison said suddenly and closed the book and picked it up and started to walk to the kitchen. Stephani looked at Halee and shrugged. "Well I better get back to Chad." Stephani said walking out of the attic. "Yeah I should get back to Hayden." Halee said with a chipper voice. Stephani didn’t really feel like walking down to the kitchen so she orbed out of the attic and down to the kitchen. She appeared right beside Chad and smiled. "I think Brooke’s just hungry." She said with a smile. She walked over to the fridge and opened it and got out a bottle of milk. "Now what is the demon we should be looking for called?" Alison asked as she flipped through the pages of the book. "Ummm, I think she calls herself Allyssa." He said. "Ah such a human name." Halee said. "Allyssa, A medium level demon. Her powers include fire balls, power consumption and shimmering." Alison said reading it. "Middle level?!?" Chad said shocked. Middle level demons were hard to find and even harder to kill. Stephani looked from Chad over to Alison. "What’s the diffrence in middle level and lower or higher level?" She asked. Alison looked at them. "They are a mix between a lower level and a higher level and the higer level is usually stronger in them then in normal upper level demons." She said reading from memory. Stephani and Halee and the rest of the gang looked at Alison shocked. "Have you been reading up on someone?" Chad asked calmly looking from Stephani to Alison. Only Stephani knew his real name, Relzome. Alison nodded. "Yeah I have been reading up about this very interesting demon that calls himself...Relzome." Stephani and Chad looked at each other. Stephani had a worried look on her face and all that was on Chad’s was a mixture of anger and worry. He knew that Alison and Halee would try and destroy him if she ever found out that he was Relzome. "Well what did you find out about Relzome?" Stephani asked as she fed the baby. She shifted her weight from her right side to her left and looked at Alison. Hayden started to pace from one side of the room being a slight distraction to Alison and everyone. "Will you stop that!?!" Alison said with a slight hint of annoyince in her voice. Hayden shook his head and looked up at the girls. "I will if we can get back on track. You girls need to focus on Alyssa at this moment. Relzome can wait." He said going back to pacing.
All of a sudden Allyssa shimmered in and started throwing a couple of fire balls. "DEMON" Halee shouted and levitated to get away from the fire ball that was shot at her. She kicked Allyssa down to the floor. Alison looked at Stephani. "Give me Brooke and go get the crystals." Alison said and waited for Stephani to hand her the baby. "No I think Chad should hold her while I go get the crystals." She said handing Chad his daughter. Chad took her and held her as he watched Stephani orb out to the attic to grab the crystals. Stephani orbed back in and started to place the crystals around the knocked out Allyssa. "How’s that?" She asked. "Good. Now she can’t attack you guys." Hayden said. Stephani hurryed around to her sisters and they started to flip though the book of shadows to see what they could find. "There's nothing here!" Alison shouted looking over at Halee. Panic grew in the girls faces. Stephani opened her mouth to say something but Allyssa woke up, stood up, and threw a fireball at Stephani. Threw all the running around like a chicken with its head cut off someone moved a crystal so now they were useless and Allyssa would be able to leave. "I'll be back for the rest of you." She shouted and shimmered out. "Stephani!" Alison yelled and ran over to her older sister. "Hayden heal her!" Halee told him looking from Stephani to Hayden. Hayden ran over to her and put his hands over her right shoulder where she got hit and started to healed her. "What's wrong. Why's it taking so long?" Chad called from the other side of the bar. Hayden looked up at them. "I...I don't know why but she's not healing." Halee and Alison looked sick as did Chad. Halee shook her head. "Does that mean she's....dead?" She choaked the last word out. Hayden shook his head. "No...the demon did something. I don't know what but we need to find out. Fast."
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More to come if I get okay reviews haha (and the last part seems rushed...I just wrote it because it needed something ha)
